Prompt …I didn’t remember putting it on…
One clear morning with plenty of sunshine in his back garden, Jack was with his pet mouse, Squeakums. Jack was teaching Squeakums tricks. So far, he’d taught Squeakums to walk on his hind legs, backflip, put on dolls’ clothes, oh, and cannonball into his pool. “These tricks will do great in my show!” he thought.
So, the next day Jack presented the tricks to the crowd. They liked the dolls’ clothes. Jack said, “I didn’t remember putting it on him. He must of done it himself!” as Squeakums walked on stage in a tuxedo! His show was a hit!
1 Comment
Jackie Cameron · 7 December 2020 at 11:34 am
Michelle, I’ve really enjoyed reading your story about Squeakums and appreciate your use of correct sentence construction, particularly commas.
Thanks for sharing,
Jackie (Team 100WC)
New Zealand
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