Words to be used in writing: bricks, gorilla, pretty, running, yellow
As we drive to the bank, we put on our gorilla masks. We pull up to the front entrance and get out of the car. Dave tells us to be quick, since he’s driving this time. We are all pretty nervous, but we stay determined and walk through the door. Joe grabs the guard and Eddie fires his gun to get the attention of the people in the bank. While Eddie and Joe deal with the hostages, I start running to the vault which is in a yellow room. I slice the vault door and grab the gold bricks.
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Mrs Richards · 19 November 2018 at 3:43 pm
Wow Zachary – what a great use of these words. You grabbed my attention and held it all the way to that last word. I really liked the fact that you were all nervous. First person worked well in your story. Thanks for sharing.
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