Prompt: Red
A little zebra had red stripes. You may think this is a good thing but it is not because she wanted to be the same as the other zebras. “I am going to go to Red Panda to see if he can help”, said Little Zebra.
“Sorry, Little Zebra, I can’t help you, but I can make a magic red car for you to fly to Christmas Land”, said Red Panda. “Yes”, said Little Zebra.
“Zoom”, went the car. She found Rudolph and he told her she was special and lucky, so she grabbed the car and went back home.
3 Comments
Naomi Addletont · 17 November 2019 at 12:04 am
Hello Ella,
I was really impresssed by your blog, in particular the punctuation and onomatopoeia you have used which made it flow so well. Our year 3 class at Wildground in England is called Red Pandas so it was fun to see a blog with a Red Panda in it. It sounds like Rudolph gave red zebra some good advice and I’m glad she went home happy.
Mrs Addleton
Poppy · 20 November 2019 at 2:27 am
Very good and lots of punctuated sentences!
Madison · 21 November 2019 at 9:12 pm
Dear Ella,
You are so talented . This story was so magical coming from a year 2. Make shore you read your work and carry on the good work.
by Madison!
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