Prompt ….the orange one spoke first….
It was Halloween and I was with my two friends in the forest near my house. We were at the last house and our buckets were nearly full.
We walked up to the front door and pulled the door knocker three times and waited. We could hear footsteps thumping every ten seconds. Just as we thought about running away, the door swung open and there were three weirdos standing there, dressed in purple, pink and orange costumes. My friends and I said, “Trick or treat?”. The orange one spoke first and asked, “Did you come for candy?” “We did!”.
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Mrs P (Team 100WC) · 12 November 2019 at 3:14 pm
Hi Hayley
You have set the scene really well for your 100WC. I love the idea of people dressed in different colour costumes. At first the reader thinks they are going to be scary people, but really they were just asking about candy. You have been very clever with your writing to be able to trick the reader! Well done.
Mrs P (Team 100WC)
Wellington, New Zealand
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