Prompt: ‘but where did it go?, she shouted.
Once in a far-off galaxy on an alien planet there was a war between humans and the Sibatrons.
Far off, at an alien scrapyard, Jack and Rose were trying to find their alien pet called Fuzzball, “but where did it go?” she shouted to Jack. Quick, over here! I’ve found Fuzzball’s blue fur trail’, Jack called without hesitation.
They followed the trail, when all of sudden, ‘A Mothership!” they gasped. A door came down and there was Fuzzball, in charge of what seemed like an army of his kind. Then they realised that Fuzzball’s mission was to bring peace and that he did.
4 Comments
Yanalie · 27 October 2019 at 7:40 pm
Well done, Michelle. We enjoyed reading your story and we thought that you had used some really good words, like hesitation and gasped. We would have liked to know how Jack and Rose followed their pet’s trail and where they found the mothership. Did they have to go to space?
arthur · 29 October 2019 at 1:35 am
well done I like reading your description well done henry
Arthur · 29 October 2019 at 1:41 am
I love your description and your use of adjectives keep up the good work.
Vittoria · 29 October 2019 at 2:09 am
Good story! Just never forget to add punctuation specially when it is a dialogue.
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