Prompt: giraffe, sang, pink, painful, dusty.
I sang as loud as a giraffe at choir. My ears were painful and pink because I was bursting with laughter.
I walked out of the station. It was all dusty outside because there was a dust storm. I got my dirty boots out of my bag and fell because a person pushed me. I didn’t know why he pushed me but I was hurt. I had an extra bandage in my bag so I pulled it out and wrapped it around my leg.
Off I went, limping to my house. I rested and then I made my yummy dinner.
2 Comments
John · 19 February 2020 at 3:09 am
It’s a good story there was just one grammar mistake where you said “I got my dirty boots out of my bag and fell because a person pushed me.” when you should have said ‘I got my dirty boots out of my bag and fell because someone pushed me.”
Cath (Team100, Melbourne, Australia) · 29 February 2020 at 1:53 pm
Hello Milla, you have written a great response to the challenge words. The opening to your story is really good. I love the simile you have used (giraffe singing at choir). I could just picture it. You have used really descriptive language that engages your reader in the story. Well done.
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