Jack and I were test subjects for a new shrinking product. We had already tried it on a sheep and it seemed to have worked. Mum and Dad didn’t want me to do it but I just said to them, “I want to explore the world. You shall call me Beetleboy and Jack, my sidekick, Cocky Cockroach.”
Jack and I were ready to shrinkify so we drank the potion and Jack exclaimed, “It tastes like burnt apples!” We shrunk and went to investigate outside where we found a dead bee on the floor. Little did we know that it was a ZomBEE!!!
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Mrs Boyce · 11 November 2020 at 5:50 pm
Hi Angus,
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
I love your TITLE – It immediately aroused my interest and now I want to learn more about their adventures.
I think you’ll have to write a series.
Good work this week.
Keep writing.
Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland
https://blog.seesaw.me/mrsboyce/#!/
Michelle Tham · 15 November 2020 at 3:29 pm
Hello Mrs Boyce,
Angus was so happy to receive your feedback. He decide to write a sequel to this story and asked me to send it to you in case you didn’t see it on the 100wc website.
https://www.wiseowllearning.com.au/writing/100wc/beetleboy-and-cocky-cockroach-part-ii-by-angus-year-7/
Thank you for providing inspiration for Angus, who was a very reluctant writer until recently.
With kindest regards,
Michelle Tham
(Wise Owl Learning)
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