Once there were two very lonely fishermen who could not catch a thing! They had tried every spot in a one hundred kilometre radius, but nothing would bite. They had tried all of the types of fishing styles out there, such as fly fishing, trawling, live baiting, blast fishing and cyanide fishing. There were other things they could try, but they were exhausted, so instead they went to the fishing black market to buy magic bait. When they tried to use this bait, all the fish, lobsters, yabbies, crabs and shellfish came and jumped right on top of their boat.
Categories: 100 Word Challenge
2 Comments
Matthew · 5 December 2018 at 1:21 am
Hi Jameson! I noticed you commented on my 100wc, so I decided to comment on yours. I really liked how you said the fisherman tried everything, and he had to get some magic bait. I would really like to know how many fish the fisherman caught. Nice Story!
Henry · 5 December 2018 at 8:04 am
Great story. You had my attention the whole entire time. The only thing that you could do better is your grammar. You could do that on Grammar.ly or something like that. Come to my blog at https://kidblog.org/class/mrs-harts-7th-grade-class/posts/9u1703a6yshpeaogyafy3bic9. I think that you will like it.
Henry
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