I ran my bath, the hot steam fogging up the mirror. I unwrapped my orange bath bomb, plopped it in and watched it fizz. I turned on the TV and flicked through the channels with my remote. Leaning back, I watched the fighters tackle each other to the ground, then I decided to watch something else. As I flicked, I stumbled across the music channel. My favourite song was on so I stood up and danced, kicking and splashing with my bare legs. As I reached for my towel, I fell clumsily back into the bath, taking it with me.
Categories: 100 Word Challenge
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Ciara · 24 October 2018 at 8:19 am
Hi Ella,
Well done on your piece, it was very enjoyable to read. I would probably change channels too if there was fighting on, much better to listen to music and have a boogie! Although, as you pointed out, dancing is a dangerous sport! I really liked the verbs you used like “flicked” and “unwrapped”, they really added to the quality of the writing.
Keep up the great work!
Ciara (Team 100)
Wicklow, Ireland
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