Prompt “I’m trying to hold on”, he shouted.
Hi, I’m George and did you know I climbed a mountain in Turkey? I saw a goat having a pool party with his friends”.
It took George two days to get to the top of the mountain. He felt exhausted by the time he got there. He was coming down the mountain when suddenly he fell over. He grabbed onto a big black rock. “I’m trying to hold on,” he shouted. Suddenly, George’s hands slipped and he fell again. It was a good thing he was near the ground. He landed with a big splat but he was not hurt.
1 Comment
Anna (Team 100WC) · 8 July 2021 at 6:13 am
Hi Emir,
What an interesting and creative story this week, I really enjoyed reading this. Not only was your narrative very smooth, I also enjoyed the tone of voice, as well as clear descriptions you used throughout. I’m certainly glad that George was not injured and that he got to witness something pretty cool after spending so long climbing the mountain!
Well done and keep up the good work,
Anna (Team 100WC)
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