Prompt words: BANANA VOLCANO SWIMMING PURPLE HAIRY
Hi, my name is Jazz and my hobbies include singing , dancing and swimming.
One day, my friend was at the front door saying that she obtained the new eye drops from Best Buy. Little did I know that she had switched them with her own concoction. The mix was purple and in a banana-shaped tube. As I opened the container, it exploded like a volcano onto my desk and some splashed into my eyes. When I opened them everything was hairy, even my hands. I looked into the mirror. My eyes were purple. “Ahhhhhhhh!” I screamed, “I look so scary.”
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Cath (Team100, Melbourne, Australia) · 30 July 2019 at 5:37 pm
Hello Brookes, this is so creative. I like the way you have just given a bit of a clue by saying, “little did I know…” to let us know that we should keep reading to find out what will happen. You have used language really well and your writing is concise. Well done.
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