I can’t wait to go to the concert because it’s going to be awesome. When we arrive we are gonna get front-row seats. While we are waiting in the 34 degree heat, we will grab an ice-cold drink and a good old ice-cream. After that, the first band will be on. Last time, when the guitarist started he was completely out of tune, but he finally got himself together after the third song. I hope he is better this year to make up for his terrible performance last year. I’m still hyped though. I’m optimistic that this time will be better.
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Terry Team100WC England · 19 February 2019 at 8:47 pm
Hi Rex, I really like the way I, the reader am caught up in your excitement straight away and that this carries through to the end, good work. I like, also, your optimism that shines through the whole piece as well. you have structured the writing well and your use of punctuation is good, nicely done.
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