Words to be included in the writing: pretty, gorilla, yellow, bricks, running
A yellow gorilla was running down the street like a madman. Luckily, some giant bricks stopped him when he ran into them, so he looked for a good hiding spot. He found a dumpster, a car, and even a crow’s nest, but no good hiding spots, so he had to find somewhere else to hide. He went to a small town called Oklahoma, which runs a very important company called Oklahoma Toys. They have pretty amazing toys. The beast hid as a teddy bear, a duck, an employee, but in the end the police caught him and took him home.
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Mrs Skinner · 18 November 2018 at 9:51 pm
Hello Mitchell!
Well done for getting all the words into your piece of writing. They were quite tricky, weren’t they!
I think that must have been an intelligent gorilla realising he had to find a better place to hide. I’m sure the customers in the shop would have been amazed to be served by him when he was an employee.
Did he come from a special zoo that only has yellow animals? I’ve been wondering where he came from. It must be a very colourful forest!
Thank you for joining 100WC this week!
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