Prompt …the orange one spoke first….
Paul was an ordinary man, but there was one day that wasn’t ordinary at all. That day, Paul went to the shops to buy some cheesecakes when he found some little men on the shelf. They were all different colours. The orange one spoke first and said, “Are you buying sushi?” then Paul replied, “No, just ten cheesecakes.” Paul wasn’t sure what was going on. The purple one said, “Do you want to buy one of my special pies? They are on sale.” Paul then had enough of it and ran out of the shop crying all the way home.
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Chess2Impress · 18 March 2021 at 5:34 am
I really like how you described Paul’s personality before going into the story! Great description and use of the prompt as well!
-Chess2Impress
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Angelina · 18 March 2021 at 5:35 am
Hi Angus!
My name is Angelina, and I am an 8th grader from Virginia, USA. What a creative story! I also like cheesecake, and I am curious to see how the men were able to talk to Paul, or if they will chat with someone else. Great job!
– Angelina
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